BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 18

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New words: 931
Total words: 22640
What I hate about my writing: What I hate about my typing really, need to be faster in thirty minutes.
The Good: Five pages left. Five days of making the sessions.
The Bad: Five pages left.
Fave Hannah line: "That's not true, I asked you to take the job.”
What I'm looking forward to: No more typing.
What I'm not looking forward to: Figuring out how to track editing progress.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 17

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New words: 953
Total words: 21709
What I hate about my writing: Needing to find a beta reader who actually has some medical knowledge.
The Good: The stack left to do is really thin. Four days of making the sessions.
The Bad: The stack left to do is really thin.
Fave Vinnie line: “Fine time to be worried about pest control, sweetheart.”
What I'm looking forward to: No more typing.
What I'm not looking forward to: Figuring out how to track editing progress.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 16

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 3786
Total words: 20756
What I hate about my writing: Messing up my schedule.
The Good: Slow day at work and I finally caught up on all the sessions I missed last week.
The Bad: I typed for two hours today. That’s not even a marathon session for me, but it’s more than I’ve been used to doing and I’ve got the whole bleary-eye, shut-up-brain tiredness on. And I still have homework to do.
What I'm looking forward to: No more typing. I will admit it was not the most efficient use of my time, but it was gnawing at me to just do it.
What I'm not looking forward to: Figuring out how to track editing progress.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 15

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 866
Total words: 16970
What I hate about my writing: Getting an accurate word count from handwritten notes.
The Good: Keeping current with daily session two days in a row.
The Bad: Still feeling the missed backlog as something to do.
What I'm looking forward to: No more typing.
What I'm not looking forward to: No more typing.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 14

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 3992
Total words: 16104
What I hate about my writing: Messing up my schedule.
The Good: I have made five thirty-minute periods of what I have missed.
The Bad: I need to make three more thirty-minute periods. I know, I know, I’m not supposed to count what I missed and just start over, but the story is done and I don’t want to spend a whole week typing it. Especially since I should have been done with it yesterday.
Fave Jack line: "He who has the gun gives the orders."
Fave Charley line: “And you should have a chat with Limburger about how well that works.”
What I'm looking forward to: No more typing.
What I'm not looking forward to: Thirty handwritten pages before “the end.”

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 13

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 929
Total words: 12112
What I hate about my writing: That I found a much better start of a scene in my purse notebook that was much better than what I have typed..
The Good: I got the medical scene done!
The Bad: I have lots to do in the house and must set it aside for a while.
Fave Throttle line: "Like you are the expert in Charley. You had to have her memory wiped and even then she didn't stay with you."
Fave McCyber line: “Fancy stunts on souped-up bikes just isn't intimidating.”
What I'm looking forward to: The End
What I'm not looking forward to: I still have two and a half scene left to write before “the end” and I still have to go back and fix that other scene.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 12

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 692
Total words: 11183
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: Day 12, and I have finally gotten to typing the major plot complication.
The Bad: I hope the upcoming scenes with Jack are crazy enough.
Fave Modo line: Reminded me of Cocono Canyon."
What I'm looking forward to: The resolution.
What I'm not looking forward to: The medical scene before the resolution.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 11

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 1002
Total words: 10491
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: Day 11, it’s becoming a habit.
The Bad: I still have to work on sleep to keep getting up on time.
Fave Modo line: “I know you never got a formal induction, but you are part of the group, not a groupie that can be dropped."
What I'm looking forward to: The resolution in the handwritten notes, I’m almost there.
What I'm not looking forward to: The medical scene I have to get through before the resolution.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 10

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 991
Total words: 9489
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: Workout and writing time this morning, yeah! And Day 10, WOOT!
The Bad: I don’t want to stop typing.
What I'm looking forward to: The resolution.
What I'm not looking forward to: A fight between the bros that I have to type next.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 9

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 948
Total words: 8498
What I hate about my writing: My day feels horrible if I don’t get my writing done in the morning.
The Good: Day 9, WOOT! Woke up on time! And I got four scenes left to do from where my handwritten draft is before “The End.”
The Bad: A bit more typing to do until I reach that point.
What I'm looking forward to: Finishing the whole damn thing.
What I'm not looking forward to: Having to write a fight I haven’t put much thought into.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 8

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 1004
Total words: 7550
What I hate about my writing: Woke up late today and got the 30 minutes done at lunch. My coworkers didn’t bother me today.
The Good: Day 8, WOOT! And I got five scenes left to do from where my handwritten draft is before “The End.”
The Bad: A bit more typing to do until I reach that point.
What I'm looking forward to: Finishing the Charley and Jack fight in the handwritten draft. And somebody needs to compare her to Linda Hamiliton/Sarah Connor.
What I'm not looking forward to: Having to write in the POV of someone blacking out.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 7

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 820
Total words: 6546
What I hate about my writing: Woke up late today and got the 30 minutes done at lunch. My coworkers don’t seem to understand, I’m at lunch. “It’ll only take a minute.”
The Good: Day 7, WOOT! And I got six scenes left to do from where my handwritten draft is before “The End.”
The Bad: A bit more typing to do until I reach that point.
What I'm looking forward to: Finishing the Charley and Jack fight in the handwritten draft. And somebody needs to compare her to Linda Hamiliton/Sarah Connor.
What I'm not looking forward to: Having to write in the POV of someone blacking out.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 6

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 1071
Total words: 5726
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: Day 6, WOOT! And I got my outline done, eight scenes left to do from where my handwritten draft is before “The End.”
The Bad: A bit more typing to do until I reach that point.
Fave Throttle line: "Which hospital is he in?"
Fave Charley line: “This feels like a macho version of Truth or Dare.”
What I'm looking forward to: Finishing the Charley and Jack fight in the handwritten draft. And somebody needs to compare her to Linda Hamiliton/Sarah Connor.
What I'm not looking forward to: Having to wait until I get done with chores before getting the finish the fight.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 5

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 1133
Total words: 4655
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: I made the fifth day of making writing one of the first things I do every morning. WOOT!
The Bad: My handwritten notes need to be caught up with what I wrote last night while walking.
Fave Modo line: "Tell me you didn't start flirtin' with another girl while out on a date. With Charley. Who knows how to use a bazooka."
What I'm looking forward to: Finishing the Jack and Charley fight.
What I'm not looking forward to: Writing from the POV of someone who’s about to blackout.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 4

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 481
Total words: 3522
What I hate about my writing: My descriptive abilities are subpar.
The Good: I got my word count despite oversleeping. My sluggish fingers typed despite oversleeping. And I added back in the Stoker and Carbine scene.
The Bad: I overslept, and missed workout time. Really need to figure out why I keep doing this on Thursdays and Fridays. And I think the Stoker and Carbine scene needs more description, but I got the dialogue, which wasn’t working before when I chopped it out.
Fave Carbine line: “You’re agreeing with me? You never agree with me. You got your tail captured by Sand Raiders rather than agree with me.”
Fave Stoker line: “I don’t hero worship, Carbine.”
What I'm looking forward to: Jack and Charley’s confrontation.
What I'm not looking forward to: Not having enough time in the day to just type until The End.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 3

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 700
Total words: 3041
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: I got my word count despite oversleeping. My sluggish fingers typed despite oversleeping.
The Bad: I overslept, and missed having extra time to work on the story.
What I'm looking forward to: Jack and Charley’s confrontation.
What I'm not looking forward to: Not having enough time in the day to just type until The End.

BMFM: Evil Jack: For Worse 2

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 1100
Total words: 2341
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: Made day two of establishing the habit and got my workout in. And didn’t lose electricity like it threatened to when I woke up.
The Bad: My cat thinks typing means the fingers are moving for him to grab.
Fave Charley line: "Will that work? And what's wrong with a stern talking to?"
Fave Throttle line: "And how many times have you got Vinnie to listen to a stern talking?"
Fave Hannah line: "I'm never going to get big enough so my legs hit the ground."
What I'm looking forward to: Making my third habit day.
What I'm not looking forward to: Getting my notes in an order to type from.

Evil Jack: For Worse Part 1

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Biker Mice From Mars: Evil Jack: For Worse

New words: 833
Total words: 1241
What I hate about my writing: Actually, nothing today.
The Good: I made my daily goal.
The Bad: I wish I had woke up on time to make my daily goal. It was a holiday, though, it didn’t mess up going to work.
Fave Vinnie line: "Okay, one little mistake...."
Fave Charley line: "Your ego is now large enough to protect you and my daughter? Does it function like an airbag?"
Fave Modo line: "I was inside." Modo's metal thumb jabbed over his shoulder at the garage.
Fave Hannah line: It was never good when Mommy used all her names.
Fave Throttle line: "Does it look like I had a chance to stop him?"
What I'm looking forward to: Having another great writing day.
What I'm not looking forward to: Getting all the POV jumps straight so you know where the characters are and what they know.