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Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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New Words: 290
Chapter Twenty total words: 2100
Total words for the new draft: 90,259
What I hate: Being unprepared. Here I have some extra time, and I don't think I brought all my Forget the Sun notes.
The Good: Chapter Twenty is slowly coming together. It's probably going to end up a breather chapter before the Lull before the Second Plot Point.
The Bad: My sleep schedule is out of whack on the waking up side, and I don't know what's causing it.
Fave line: "He's killed eighteen sentients already. None of us can afford to be cocky."
What I'm looking forward to: AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! eventually. Now add Dark Shadows; what? I like Tim Burton creepy.
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over. I don't know if the restaurant scene will go in Chapter Twenty or be pushed back.

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New Words: 280
Chapter Twenty total words: 1810
Total words for the new draft: 89,969
What I hate: Being so sleepy with no good reason.
The Good: Managed to get more words done despite the weird sleepy spell I am under.
The Bad: My pattern last week was work a day, take a day off. I already took Monday off this week. :p
Fave line: "We're not immune to [Murderer's real name]'s pushing ability, and somebody needs to stop him if we don't."
What I'm looking forward to: AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! eventually. Now add Dark Shadows; what? I like Tim Burton creepy.
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over. I don't know if the restaurant scene will go in Chapter Twenty or be pushed back.

Stellar Gift of Death Post 189

Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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METRICS
New Words: 340
Chapter Twenty total words: 1530
Total words for the new draft: 89,689
What I hate: Fuzzy television pictures and I don't know why it's fuzzy.
The Good: I got writing work done on a Sunday . Wow.
The Bad: I need to write on this story every day of the week and that hasn't happened in a while.
Fave line: "I just want to make sure that you're not so nice that we actually lose our prisoner."
What I'm looking forward to: AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! eventually. Now add Dark Shadows; what? I like Tim Burton creepy.
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over. I don't know if the restaurant scene will go in Chapter Twenty or be pushed back.

Stellar Gift of Death Post 188

Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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New Words: 332
Chapter Nineteen total words: 3601
Chapter Twenty total words: 1190
Total words for the new draft: 89,349
What I hate: I have no idea why I'm so sleepy.
The Good: Now I'm sure I've finished Chapter 19. The scene is much stronger now with the brain wave and transitions into the last scene of the chapter better than it had before.
The Bad: I feel like I'm so far behind because I worked so little this week.
Fave line: Sithna frowned so hard at that bottle Zy lifted it up so she could see it better.
What I'm looking forward to: AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! eventually. Now add Dark Shadows; what? I like Tim Burton creepy.
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over. I don't know if the restaurant scene will go in Chapter Twenty or be pushed back.

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Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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METRICS
New Words: 290
Chapter Nineteen total words: 3606
Chapter Twenty total words: 858
Total words for the new draft: 89,017
What I hate: Telling myself I will finish this up at home and then not.
The Good: I thought I was through with Chapter 19. Then came a brain wave and I figured out I wasn't.
The Bad: It took two days for my writing grove to resettle after the weekend I had. This does not bode well for me continuing to help out and get my own goals accomplished. :(
Fave line: "All my paintings are abstracts. My still-life's look like abstracts, so why bother setting the stuff out in the first place."
What I'm looking forward to: AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! eventually.
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over. I don't know if the restaurant scene will go in Chapter Twenty or be pushed back.

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Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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New Words: 232
Chapter Twenty total words: 858
Total words for the new draft: 88,727
What I hate: The mess that is on my paying job desk right now. Where are the checks to process?
The Good: Chapter Twenty is off to a great start.
The Bad: In all likelihood, I won't work on it again until Monday.
Fave line: "They or their beneficiaries will be well compensated for that potentiality."
What I'm looking forward to: AVENGERS ASSEMBLE!
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over. I don't know if the restaurant scene will go in Chapter Twenty or be pushed back.

Caught my interest

Some Tales of Mhorag -- Lake monster fiction isn't on my list of subjects, but I really like the cadence of the first two tales and a bit of the third.

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New Words: 265
Chapter Nineteen total words: 3316
Total words for the new draft: 88,495
What I hate: I don't mind the rain, but the thunder and lightening can stop right now.
The Good: I finished Chapter Nineteen!
The Bad: It took me three days to get the KanbanFlow boards how I wanted them, which killed my writing time. I hope I can make up what I lost in the rest of this week.
Fave line: "Having been there, I do believe you. But you didn't try to get away from [Murderer's real name] once he took you away from it."
What I'm looking forward to: Starting Chapter Twenty.
What I'm not looking forward to: All the stuff that happens in Chapter Twenty that I skipped over.