Saturday, November 08, 2008

Biker Mice From Mars: Turbo 8

Biker Mice From Mars: Wars Are Won: Turbo

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Biker Mice From Mars: Wars Are Won: Turbo

New words: 680
Total words: 10727
What I hate about my writing: Being stuck on Mars when no one else is.
The Good: Introduced a friend to Biker Mice From Mars because she didn’t understand when I said I was distracted because I was on Mars still.
The Bad: Being hostess to said friend eating into my writing time. Tamara’s pithy cool line became a cool speech. I hope readers will pick up exactly what qualities Throttle gets from his parents and I hope it surprises a few of them. Then maybe not; look at who he has dated.
Fave Tamara line: “Did an asshole forget to evolve and spawn you?”
Fave Charley line: “Not behind your father’s back if he said you’re not old enough.”
Fave Sparks line: “Could you at least not tell Throttle it’s sixteen here? He’ll probably convince Dad I have to wait seven years instead of five.”
What I'm looking forward to: Getting back on target.
What I'm not looking forward to: Stupid word count pressure.

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