Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Stellar Gift of Death Post 126

Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

Progress Bar from Writertopia

METRICS
New Words: 556
Chapter Sixteen total words: 2199
Total words for the new draft: 67,747
What I hate: Bad news totally knocked me off the game plan of getting 800 words.
The Good: The scene shifted in a better direction than I had in the rough draft.
The Bad: I heard back from the potential second job and the rejection sent me into a pity party.
Fave line: “Fine, a different topic of discussion than your hard-headed detriment to your health. What do you have against decorations?”
What I'm looking forward to: The nasty surprise for Zy in the second scene of Chapter 16.
What I'm not looking forward to: Paying bills.

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