Note from edit: Bring out the antagonism between Locke and Kate earlier. "Shall we see what I can do to your face with a knife?"
Hopefully, that won't spoil the "wait, he sides with her?!" at the end.
Monday, August 21, 2006
The Blue Man Post 20
Note to change due to a returned critique: Murdock protesting Cyndia's (look up alternate spelling of name too--if the author can't remember how to spell it...) involvement in capturing Thernsten. C. showing off how logical she is and leaving out the fact that she has no real self-defense training. Apparantly cocky teenager is coming out as a know-it-all adult.
Let Us Give Thanks Post 5
Something to remember for edits:
Tala grabbed the arm rests of the chair and leaned into Charley's face. "The only difference between me and you is you're only getting threatened and I know whose genetalia to mutilate. ... I have to give Vinnie credit for keeping his mouth shut."
Throttle: "She's right."
Charley placed her hands on top of her temples. "I can't think anymore."
"Well stop trying to think."
"Somebody has to; you guys don't!"
"We do too."
"Okay, name a situation that you didn't blast your way out of it."
"That's not fair. We have to blast our way out of all situations in the end."
Tala grabbed the arm rests of the chair and leaned into Charley's face. "The only difference between me and you is you're only getting threatened and I know whose genetalia to mutilate. ... I have to give Vinnie credit for keeping his mouth shut."
Throttle: "She's right."
Charley placed her hands on top of her temples. "I can't think anymore."
"Well stop trying to think."
"Somebody has to; you guys don't!"
"We do too."
"Okay, name a situation that you didn't blast your way out of it."
"That's not fair. We have to blast our way out of all situations in the end."
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