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Finished and posted.
Overall, I'm drained by the story right now so I don't know if I'm feeling nit-picky or if there's something to be nit-picky about. My conclusion came out better than I hoped. What I had in mind before the necklace inspiration wouldn't have shown Az and Ambrose reconciliation. I wish I could have shown Az and Ambrose being romantic before their fight, but trying to keep it short. And the only character I felt truly comfortable with their POV was Jack actually, followed by Hatter and I'm having huge doubts I even came close to his speech patterns.
Best way to deal with I feel like a sucky writer? Getting back to writing.
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