Sunday, December 04, 2011

Stellar Gift of Death Post 127

Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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METRICS
New Words: 861
Chapter Sixteen total words: 3036
Total words for the new draft: 68,608
What I hate: I was supposed to work on this story Saturday and Sunday. Saturday writing didn’t happen at all.
The Good: This was a section of the rough draft that refused to develop in the notebook. Typing in some stuff I had left blank finally opened it up for me. Also I rearranged the office slightly—added another bookshelf—and created a charging station for the cell phones away from the speakers. No more feedback!
The Bad: What is in the damn trunk turned out to be a MUCH harder question to answer than I had first anticipated.
Fave line: “I’m glad he did too.” Her face heated again as he blinked at her. “I think Rejeld had figured out Ifeket and Possatact had done to make him target them was done without your knowledge. But that’s no reason to trust he’ll skip you again.”
What I'm looking forward to: The nasty surprise for Zy in the second scene of Chapter 16.
What I'm not looking forward to: Will I actually make it to that scene?

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