Friday, December 23, 2011

Stellar Gift of Death Post 138

Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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METRICS
New Words: 886
Chapter Seventeen total words: 3082
Total words for the new draft: 73,607
What I hate: Holy crap! When was the last time I cleaned the stove top?
The Good: I’m happy with the scene so far, but Riteno has been rather sedate.
The Bad: I’ve figured out how the trap will be sprung, which is good because I’ve been rather clueless about it ever since I thought it up five or six years ago. Now I just don’t know if I should start Chapter Eighteen or put it in Chapter Seventeen.
Fave line: “And you are his zy.”
What I'm looking forward to: The holiday and I will be locking myself in my house for the majority of the duration.
What I'm not looking forward to: Getting pulled out of my house for family obligations.

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