Wednesday, December 07, 2011

Stellar Gift of Death Post 129

Stellar Gift of Death 2011 Revision

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METRICS
New Words: 225
Chapter Sixteen total words: 3378
Total words for the new draft: 68,950
What I hate: My cat deciding to wake me up when I’m trying to go to sleep.
The Good: Despite the tired brain, I got some words in.
The Bad: I feel like every transition has sucked and continues to suck long after the scene has shifted.
Fave line: “If you don’t mind me asking, what did you run into?”
What I'm looking forward to: The nasty surprise for Zy in the fourth scene of Chapter 16.
What I'm not looking forward to: Will I actually make it to that scene?

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